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		By: Moriah		</title>
		<link>https://moriahjovan.com/talesofdunham/blog/one-day-i-started-writing-a-book/#comment-9003</link>

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		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Jan 2014 03:27:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[&lt;blockquote&gt;I didn’t realize that you were part of that proud sorority.&lt;/blockquote&gt;

Oh yes! 50 hours a week and 15 or 18 credit hours. Can&#039;t remember. Anyway, lots of time for homework and writing. 

Also, it was an odd thing to learn that there are twenty-four hours in a day. Not intellectually, as in, the dark part of that twenty-four is for settling in and sleeping. But in practice, as in, those are available hours in which to get stuff done!!!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>I didn’t realize that you were part of that proud sorority.</p></blockquote>
<p>Oh yes! 50 hours a week and 15 or 18 credit hours. Can&#8217;t remember. Anyway, lots of time for homework and writing. </p>
<p>Also, it was an odd thing to learn that there are twenty-four hours in a day. Not intellectually, as in, the dark part of that twenty-four is for settling in and sleeping. But in practice, as in, those are available hours in which to get stuff done!!!</p>
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		By: kitten		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[kitten]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Jan 2014 21:31:59 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m running behind but one sentence inn this post jumped out and bit me on the ass. &quot;I haven&#039;t done that since i worked graveyards at a convenience store.&quot; I didn&#039;t realize that you were part of that proud sorority. I did it for a couple of years...in campustown, surrounded by bars. That was in the 80&#039;s and some of those people still recognize me!

You are one of the most creative people I know!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m running behind but one sentence inn this post jumped out and bit me on the ass. &#8220;I haven&#8217;t done that since i worked graveyards at a convenience store.&#8221; I didn&#8217;t realize that you were part of that proud sorority. I did it for a couple of years&#8230;in campustown, surrounded by bars. That was in the 80&#8217;s and some of those people still recognize me!</p>
<p>You are one of the most creative people I know!</p>
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		By: christineplouvier		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[christineplouvier]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Dec 2013 17:37:44 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[&quot;Going to Russia in the winter.&quot; That&#039;s funnier than you know: our bishop&#039;s son went to Siberia on his mission.

Your &quot;little vignettes that I’ll never publish&quot; sound like the &quot;irresponsible writing&quot; that Dermot Bolger advocated.

I wish I could take credit for &quot;gun-on-the-sideboard,&quot; but I think it&#039;s a variation on &quot;Chekhov&#039;s gun&quot; that I must have run across somewhere in my reading, and which caught my imagination, although I don&#039;t entirely agree with Chekhov. So, if I were an editor and I saw a good one lying around unused in a current story, I wouldn&#039;t tell the writer to get rid of it. I&#039;d ask about developing it in a related book. But I&#039;m a pantser, and most editors are probably congenital planners. Chekhov might have been a planner, too, for all I know. 

You seem to use your guns the way others report engaging in lucid dreaming: a sort of hybrid pantser-planner. In my case, I just left the guns on the sideboard, the windowsill, and the top of the toilet tank, and now I&#039;ve got this behemoth war story to show for it. Not exactly job security, but it keeps me off the street.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Going to Russia in the winter.&#8221; That&#8217;s funnier than you know: our bishop&#8217;s son went to Siberia on his mission.</p>
<p>Your &#8220;little vignettes that I’ll never publish&#8221; sound like the &#8220;irresponsible writing&#8221; that Dermot Bolger advocated.</p>
<p>I wish I could take credit for &#8220;gun-on-the-sideboard,&#8221; but I think it&#8217;s a variation on &#8220;Chekhov&#8217;s gun&#8221; that I must have run across somewhere in my reading, and which caught my imagination, although I don&#8217;t entirely agree with Chekhov. So, if I were an editor and I saw a good one lying around unused in a current story, I wouldn&#8217;t tell the writer to get rid of it. I&#8217;d ask about developing it in a related book. But I&#8217;m a pantser, and most editors are probably congenital planners. Chekhov might have been a planner, too, for all I know. </p>
<p>You seem to use your guns the way others report engaging in lucid dreaming: a sort of hybrid pantser-planner. In my case, I just left the guns on the sideboard, the windowsill, and the top of the toilet tank, and now I&#8217;ve got this behemoth war story to show for it. Not exactly job security, but it keeps me off the street.</p>
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		By: Moriah		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Moriah]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Dec 2013 05:58:42 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[&lt;blockquote&gt;guns-on-the-sideboard&lt;/blockquote&gt;

That&#039;s an excellent term. 

&lt;blockquote&gt;Were there gun-on-the-sideboard moments in your modern-setting novels that subsequently sent you down to the sea in the Dunham ship?&lt;/blockquote&gt;

tl;dr ALL THE FREAKING TIME. They&#039;re details most editors would ask me to take out because they don&#039;t seem to serve a purpose.

Long version:

I have tons of those, but usually I know what they are and I leave them, even though most editors would have me take them out. When I get ready to do X thing, I&#039;ve already laid the groundwork. Usually it&#039;s because while I was writing the current book, I was doing alternate scenes on the side, deleting other scenes, writing little vignettes (sketches) that I&#039;ll never publish, writing scenes for other books that tie in, so I usually know where I&#039;m going.

Disclaimer: I have broken canon a tiny bit or two, but only careful readings would tell you where

For instance, when I wrote the masquerade scene in STAY, where Vanessa&#039;s mother brings the press to ambush her, there&#039;s a part there where Etienne is sitting with Nia (the architect) in the corner. I had already written the opening scene with Etienne and Tess (yes, they existed that far back), but I had something else in mind. But I left it open just in case.

When Sabrina poked me, I hauled out all the off-the-screen things I&#039;d written on Etienne and Tess. There were portions in PROVISO, STAY, and most of it in a very old, old manuscript I&#039;d started retrofitting a while back. So I got to thinking about all that, and decided to go a different direction.

Now, I had to work around the masquerade scene in STAY when I wrote this book, but other than timing, it flowed together so seamlessly. And because it&#039;s from entirely different points of view, it&#039;ll give you a different look at Whittaker House, Vanessa, Sebastian, and the pack.

You know what&#039;s really funny though, is there&#039;s a running joke throughout this new book about going to Russia in the winter.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>guns-on-the-sideboard</p></blockquote>
<p>That&#8217;s an excellent term. </p>
<blockquote><p>Were there gun-on-the-sideboard moments in your modern-setting novels that subsequently sent you down to the sea in the Dunham ship?</p></blockquote>
<p>tl;dr ALL THE FREAKING TIME. They&#8217;re details most editors would ask me to take out because they don&#8217;t seem to serve a purpose.</p>
<p>Long version:</p>
<p>I have tons of those, but usually I know what they are and I leave them, even though most editors would have me take them out. When I get ready to do X thing, I&#8217;ve already laid the groundwork. Usually it&#8217;s because while I was writing the current book, I was doing alternate scenes on the side, deleting other scenes, writing little vignettes (sketches) that I&#8217;ll never publish, writing scenes for other books that tie in, so I usually know where I&#8217;m going.</p>
<p>Disclaimer: I have broken canon a tiny bit or two, but only careful readings would tell you where</p>
<p>For instance, when I wrote the masquerade scene in STAY, where Vanessa&#8217;s mother brings the press to ambush her, there&#8217;s a part there where Etienne is sitting with Nia (the architect) in the corner. I had already written the opening scene with Etienne and Tess (yes, they existed that far back), but I had something else in mind. But I left it open just in case.</p>
<p>When Sabrina poked me, I hauled out all the off-the-screen things I&#8217;d written on Etienne and Tess. There were portions in PROVISO, STAY, and most of it in a very old, old manuscript I&#8217;d started retrofitting a while back. So I got to thinking about all that, and decided to go a different direction.</p>
<p>Now, I had to work around the masquerade scene in STAY when I wrote this book, but other than timing, it flowed together so seamlessly. And because it&#8217;s from entirely different points of view, it&#8217;ll give you a different look at Whittaker House, Vanessa, Sebastian, and the pack.</p>
<p>You know what&#8217;s really funny though, is there&#8217;s a running joke throughout this new book about going to Russia in the winter.</p>
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		By: christineplouvier		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[christineplouvier]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Dec 2013 04:55:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[And that&#039;s advice which I gladly take. Gallipoli and the Western Front are bad enough. But WW I is only 25% of the story. The rest has to do with the hate and discontent that plagued Ireland between 1906 and 1936; the failure of the Weimar Republic, and the rise of Hitler and the Nazi party; and last, but not least, the love story (which does NOT qualify as a romance). Talk about ambitious. I may be more successful than Napoleon and Hitler were at staying away from the Eastern Front, but elsewhere in &quot;The Passions of Patriots,&quot; I&#039;m at my megalomanic best.

The thing that tripped this particular trigger was the conversation that Dillon had with Fr O&#039;Tuathail in Chapter 30 of &quot;Irish Firebrands.&quot; There were also several earlier hints that I didn&#039;t recognize as guns-on-the-sideboard when I wrote them, although I do recall wondering, &quot;Why is this in here?&quot; 

Were there gun-on-the-sideboard moments in your modern-setting novels that subsequently sent you down to the sea in the Dunham ship?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And that&#8217;s advice which I gladly take. Gallipoli and the Western Front are bad enough. But WW I is only 25% of the story. The rest has to do with the hate and discontent that plagued Ireland between 1906 and 1936; the failure of the Weimar Republic, and the rise of Hitler and the Nazi party; and last, but not least, the love story (which does NOT qualify as a romance). Talk about ambitious. I may be more successful than Napoleon and Hitler were at staying away from the Eastern Front, but elsewhere in &#8220;The Passions of Patriots,&#8221; I&#8217;m at my megalomanic best.</p>
<p>The thing that tripped this particular trigger was the conversation that Dillon had with Fr O&#8217;Tuathail in Chapter 30 of &#8220;Irish Firebrands.&#8221; There were also several earlier hints that I didn&#8217;t recognize as guns-on-the-sideboard when I wrote them, although I do recall wondering, &#8220;Why is this in here?&#8221; </p>
<p>Were there gun-on-the-sideboard moments in your modern-setting novels that subsequently sent you down to the sea in the Dunham ship?</p>
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		By: Moriah		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Moriah]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Dec 2013 22:33:12 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[WWI!!! Yowza, that&#039;s ambitious.

I only have one piece of advice: Stay out of Russia in the winter.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>WWI!!! Yowza, that&#8217;s ambitious.</p>
<p>I only have one piece of advice: Stay out of Russia in the winter.</p>
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		By: christineplouvier		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[christineplouvier]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Dec 2013 21:11:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;ve never read &quot;War and Peace,&quot; but it looks as if I&#039;m out-writing Tolstoy, in this World War I novel I&#039;m embroiled in. I really didn&#039;t mean to, but that&#039;s the story that&#039;s stuck in my head, and getting it unstuck has entailed even more research than did the first doorstop I wrote.  Thank the Muses it&#039;s not actually Russian, but that&#039;s only because I am staying the heck out of the Eastern Front. I was hoping to avoid Gallipoli, too, but an unforeseen plot twist has thrown a branch of kudzu around my ankle, and I&#039;m having the devil of a time keeping it cut back without hacking off my foot, in the process. War is hell, and so are Imaginary Friends. I&#039;m sure you know the feeling.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve never read &#8220;War and Peace,&#8221; but it looks as if I&#8217;m out-writing Tolstoy, in this World War I novel I&#8217;m embroiled in. I really didn&#8217;t mean to, but that&#8217;s the story that&#8217;s stuck in my head, and getting it unstuck has entailed even more research than did the first doorstop I wrote.  Thank the Muses it&#8217;s not actually Russian, but that&#8217;s only because I am staying the heck out of the Eastern Front. I was hoping to avoid Gallipoli, too, but an unforeseen plot twist has thrown a branch of kudzu around my ankle, and I&#8217;m having the devil of a time keeping it cut back without hacking off my foot, in the process. War is hell, and so are Imaginary Friends. I&#8217;m sure you know the feeling.</p>
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		By: Moriah		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Moriah]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Dec 2013 02:57:22 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[So, Christine, what&#039;s this Russian thing you&#039;ve got cooking up, HMMMM????]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So, Christine, what&#8217;s this Russian thing you&#8217;ve got cooking up, HMMMM????</p>
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		By: christineplouvier		</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Dec 2013 01:26:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I let my fingers do the walking in the Facebook pages, and took a gander. Instead of the well being dry, it looks as if the pump just needed priming. Let that be a lesson to us all.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I let my fingers do the walking in the Facebook pages, and took a gander. Instead of the well being dry, it looks as if the pump just needed priming. Let that be a lesson to us all.</p>
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		By: Moriah		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Moriah]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Dec 2013 00:13:30 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Well I didn&#039;t MEAN to write the dang thing at all!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well I didn&#8217;t MEAN to write the dang thing at all!</p>
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