Comments on: Zoe Winters’s “Kept”

By: Zoe Winters

Zoe Winters — Mon, 08 Dec 2008 05:27:39 +0000

Thanks, Rae, glad you’re liking it!

By: Rae Lori

Rae Lori — Mon, 08 Dec 2008 02:11:05 +0000

Will fight temptation at reading review!

Hehe I’m still reading it and enjoying it but lack of time lately is slowing me down a bit so I’m savoring it lil by little.

By: Zoe Winters

Zoe Winters — Sun, 07 Dec 2008 01:32:59 +0000

hahahahaha, Not, “slogging” in a bad way haha. Slogging in I’m a lame slow reader way. Tom is mocking me because this is such a long book and in such a compact font, hahaha. It’s like it takes me twice as long normal and everytime I get to a place where I have to stop, I say: “Man, I’m never going to finish this”

I’ll get there. It’s me, not you. Or I wouldn’t still be reading it.

By: MoJo

MoJo — Sat, 06 Dec 2008 23:20:04 +0000

“Slogging”? Oh, man…

Sure, I’ll leave one on Amazon for you. Don’t know why I didn’t think of that myself.

And you’re welcome.

By: Zoe Winters

Zoe Winters — Sat, 06 Dec 2008 23:15:00 +0000

Thanks for this awesome review, MoJo! Not to be all gimmie gimmie, but I’d love it if you’d leave one on Amazon! (And I’ll return the favor, yep, still slugging through The Proviso, but the up-side is that it’s my favorite part of the evening. )

Yes, sometimes my transitions are weak. It’s especially hard in a novella when you have limited word real estate and don’t want to spend too much time shifting scenes. It’s something I’m working to improve.

There are two more novellas in this particular series, and everything I write, though it won’t all be in the same town, is set in the same verse, so over several books and such, the picture will get more layered.

I also made a fun supplementary site http://www.theriantype.com with a little bit more of the world’s magic background through the view of the store Dayne shops at for his therian blood.

And thanks, I’m glad you liked the stuff you liked! And especially that the humor came off!